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>Beautiful subtle color use. The colors just barely seem saturated enough but is sufficient to define facial regions, especially with the guy in the left.
>Photo references are easy enough to copy, but not as easy to replicate skin tone or color, so good work for that.
>The right feels less refined and complete. This gives me the idea tha you spent more time on the left. My recommendation is to put as much time on all parts of the work especially with formal works like this.
>The Japanese characters on the center feel out of place becaus it was created digitally. If you mix digital and traditional media, you need to blend it well or the placement makes it look forced and fake.
>You can always recreate Japanese characters on paper using Masking Fluid or Masking Tape.
From ProjectComment.
I have one complaint: it seems like the black on the right is lighter than the black on the hat on the left. Is that intended? Also, there's some skin tone inconsistency.
This difference in tones of black appeared because it's two drawings that were not meant to be together in one sheet of paper. Later I united them.
I'll try to avoid such failures next time